editing a Report

Criteria. Part 1: Completeness and quality of notes to all the tutorial questions (including the discussion and individual questions). Show that a discussion of a number of key issues have been discussed within the group. Shows an understanding and awareness of the key issues involved. Quality of the notes. Appropriate references used Part2: How well does the presentation address the aims and key issues of the question? Is the presentation coherent and consistent? people' notes clearly been used as the main source of the presentation. Quality of the presentation and notes for each slide. Appropriate references used ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I did the two parts how ever i have a feedback that it's not good and i have to make the changes according to the feedback Feedback: Part 1 the Assessment Guide states ‘For group discussion questions the notes should contain, when possible a number of different views. You have not done this; only week 1 has any attempt to show any group participation, none of the other answers to Group questions show any group discussion. Did you attend the Tutorial Sessions? Some group questions not answered, e.g. Ethics quiz not done. A couple of the answers to Answers to Individual questions are too brief and sources are not cited. The sources listed in the Reference List are not in correct Harvard Referencing format and have not been cited. Part 2 The slides do not addressed the aim of the presentation or the target audience NO NOTES included in note’s section of the slides. Notes should be detailed and expand on the points on the slide. No evidence that the source of the slides is your Part 1 notes. Disjointed presentation that does not fully address the aim and key issues of the question. ----------------------------------------------------- editing what am looking for is Harvard Referencing format for both. Individual questions should be answered in more detail with sources cited and referenced correctly in the Reference List. Only cited sources should be listed in the reference list. Part 2 – slides and notes need to address all the required key issues for the aim of the presentation to the target audience. Slides should have detailed notes, which expand on the points on the slide and clearly show the source of the presentation content is your Part 1 notes. Thank you.