Hi Addisyn Jacobs,
I'm a writer of erotic romance short stories and I also offer critiques for other authors, frequently on the Dear Author First Page site, through Freelancer and for other writers.
I know what makes a good romance, what makes for steamy and erotic, but not vulgar sex, and I know the components of a short story, what draws the reader in on those first pages and keeps them interested through the whole story.
Feel free to contact me if you have any questions, and I look forward to hearing from you. I'm a full-time freelancer so I'm able to start on this right away.
Carol McKenzie