Copywriting project for service promotion

I need a professional results driven copywriter to redo my amateur description of a hosting product I'm offering on my web site. This is the text of the current copy; The common business model for hosting providers today is something akin to a landlord parcelling out swampland. Typical hosting businesses revolve around providing the lowest cost possible for the highest amount of space and bandwidth, however they do not invest heavily in the quality of these commodity items. This often results in a situation where the lowest priced hosting is acquired, and development services become the primary cost of the transaction. With this as in all things, you get what you pay for, and good site design including search engine optimisation and custom enhancements and applets for various functions can push the cost of site development astronomically high. Even then, a site that may offer good results in one area, be it a very aesthetically pleasing monolithic flash site, may offer abysmal results in another area when you want to make the content of the site dynamic and easily modified to maintain a relationship with your clients by way of regular updates. By this point in time it becomes apparent that what is needed is a balanced presence provision plan, something that does not have an enormous impact on the cashflow of your business, but gets the results that actually matter for you. Using a combination of various open source technologies I have constructed what I believe to be the answer to this problem. The hosting plan consists of no setup fee, no design outlay, no large initial fiscal investment at all. Unlike many other providers, this is not a commodity, this is a quality, tailored, finished product. The site will be designed to your specifications with recommendations from a real human being who will take the time to consult and talk with you about the various aspects of your site and counsel you according to what you are trying to accomplish. Search engine optimisation, standards adherence, attractive look and feel, user administered content management system with extensive training and support, and attractive design. No arrangement is made until the finished product is live. Standard rates for the plan are $80 AUD per month flat. This includes setup of your site with php & python scripting modules, access to administration control panel in plesk, email hosting, joomla CMS installed and preconfigured, a consultation on what you want the site to accomplish for you, a customised implementation of joomla and modules as well as any needed open source software and even built from scratch custom modules should the need arise, all packaged neatly into a single product without a setup fee. For more information or if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.