Develop script for voice over -- 2

Update: The script is almost ready but need proof reading and word it accordingly to the emotion expected. [login to view URL] I will need a copywriter who are able to develop script base on some of my scenario which I will send one after awarding. This script is use to promo a company service which help people to reduce the financial burden Below would be the end result base on guide by voice bunny [login to view URL] Please provide some of your sample work