I understand you want someone to read your book and give their opinion about it, and I'm more than qualified to help you. I graduated college in Creative Writing and Literature, I've been writing fiction for over 10 years, and I'm a fast reader, which means that I could read your book within a few hours (or days, depending on how long your book is).
My feedback will be completely honest: I'll tell you what I liked, what I disliked, what didn't make any sense, what was confusing, what could be improved upon, and what I thought was best and most interesting about it.
If you'd like to discuss further details, please feel free to message me! I look forward to working with you and reading your book!