Assist me with Bulk Marketing

We are starting a direct marketing campaign for a new online tool for Insurance Agents ([login to view URL]). The first step is to improve the call to action in the email that goes out to prospects each month. I've uploaded a sample below. I need someone to rewrite the introduction to make the call to action stronger. I would also like thoughts on how we can make the overall email layout stronger and more engaging. This is the first project. After this, we're going to launch a direct marketing campaign for the tool and will need assistance writing emails and creating landing pages that convert.