Illustrate a simple retail store floor plan

Estado: Closed
Premio: €180
Propuestas recibidas: 32
Ganador: ushuaia

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I need a simple (without that many details) illustration of a retail store floor plan.
Inspired by the attached image named retail.

I need a somewhat similar illustration done, to explain a similar concept.
Please see attached photo named "foto.jpg" for a sketch of what I want.

Basically it’s a retail store with five “areas”:
1. Entry
2. Display of t-shirts
3. Display of shoes
4. Cashier
5. Exit

For every area there should be a “signal” marked on the ground, illustrating that the area is covered by a Bluetooth signal (don’t need to show a Bluetooth logo)

The illustration should show the “shopping experience” of a little man, with a phone in his hand. Arrows indicate how he moves through the store, and the text bullets should explain what happens.

The placement of the man and the different areas in the store is just my initial idea, you are most welcome to do it different in your suggestion.

Text for the different areas:
Entry: Attract shoppers walking by, by triggering notifications on their phone
T-shirts: Provide in-store service, e.g. show list of most popular t-shirts
Shoes: Provide in-store service, e.g. show available sizes of shoes on display
Cashier: Easily let users sign up to your loyalty program, while they are waiting
Exit: Trigger thank you notification when leaving, and provide incentive to come back

I language is going to be Danish, so I will provide Danish translation for the text above for you to insert when finished (or I can add myself when you provide the file)

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“Thank you ushuaia, you did a good job here. Hope to use you for more illustrations :)”

wickings, Denmark.

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notnowjohn
- 12 años atrás
Dear, Wickings, I can't see the attached files. Can you make them available fro me somehow? Thank you.
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1. Organizador del concurso
  - 12 años atrás
  Cant seem to send directly until you submit something
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2. Organizador del concurso
  - 12 años atrás
  They are there, look under the project details
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Organizador del concurso
- 12 años atrás
I will another review for all. Nice with a flat design suggestion, I like this. One thing I relalized. This is to be shown on a website.. e.g. in the resolution 700x300 pixels.. this might mean less details needed. It should simply be easy to understand that there are five areas: entry, t-shirt, sho, cashier and exit.. and that these have a beacon zone. I therefor also think the textboxes with text in, is a no go - as the text will become too small. Its better to mark each area with a number, and then I can have explainer text below the picture
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1. ArqJM
  - 12 años atrás
  the ratio of the image must be 700x300 or may be a little higher and less long?
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2. Organizador del concurso
  - 12 años atrás
  No problem if a little off
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adityasrinate
- 12 años atrás
any feedback on my entry so I can get 5 stars like the others!
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ArqJM
- 12 años atrás
please check #27 and feedback to improve it about your suggestions... Thank you!
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Organizador del concurso
- 12 años atrás
All. I have added new individual feedback to all. Can you see this OK=
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ArqJM
- 12 años atrás
please check and feedback #16 and #17 ... thanks!
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hantig
- 12 años atrás
feedback will help a lot in this stage, Thanks!
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1. Organizador del concurso
  - 12 años atrás
  Would suggest the following:
  - simplify it, by removing the different text boxes in colors. I think we can simply indicate each area with a number (1,2,3,4,5) and then add description of each number in bottom right corner?
  - remove the "low" tshirt display, only one is needed to understand
  - remove the sho display on the "back side" of the tshirt wall, cant see what it is.. better to leave it out
  - do you have a character of a younger guy/girl instead of this grey-haired man? :)
  - Could you make "Entry" say "Indgang" and "Cashier" say "Kassen"?
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2. originalov
  - 12 años atrás
  uf i just now see the brief updates. well i will try with new suggestions.
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Organizador del concurso
- 12 años atrás
Feedback has been provided to all
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1. ushuaia
  - 12 años atrás
  I have the same problem
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2. ushuaia
  - 12 años atrás
  I have the same problem about reading your message :)
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hantig
- 12 años atrás
i will make this in 3d. Hope you will like it
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1. Organizador del concurso
  - 12 años atrás
  Look forward to seeing it :)
  - 12 años atrás