A Clearance Sale poster of 70% off everything

Clearance Sale Poster Design - 2

I've tried to make design functional by setting model as focal point so that it immediately grabs the attention of the viewer. Next eye goes to Sale 70% off. Both model and 70% sale tell in the first glance that it is a sale related poster. I've put all the information together so that Viewer's eyes doesn't have distractions to read. Hope you like it. Let me know about further changes. Feel free to text. Thank You!